``n0edle``: August 2010

a frIeND iN a sNOwY daY

Monday, August 09, 2010

ah, nganggur...n mumpung ad "cerita lama" yg pgn ak publish.. jdi yah ak coba ktik...

cerita ini asalnya dri soal essai Ujian B.indo yg ngeharusin nulis cerita flashback..

awalnya nggk seidepun kluar, tpi nggk rapa lama malah ini yg tiba-tiba muncul..

selesai ujian n dikumpulin, singkatnya udah dibagi lagi.

jawabanku emang bener, n ak ska banget ama critanya...jdi ak ubah" lagi smpe kyk sekarang ini...

btw, ak mw nyoba nulis cerpen pke ingg, n inilah hsilnya

tpi sorry sebelmnya kalo klian mala nggk mudeng baca blog-ku...

secara ingg ku kacau balau...nggk yakin semua kta" n kalimatnya bener...

ok...ak mulai ae...

:)

Another lecture about english literature, and as usual, I ignore it...daydreaming lookout trough the window...it seems getting cool outside.and maybe the snow will fall. snow, reminds me to my memories

two years ago, when I was in elementary school. since my father got a trouble in his job and entered the jail, no one wantedd to play with me..

one snowy day I sat alone on the bench at schoolyard, hard to go home with the worse condition there...my mom with his new boyfriend, sometimes they hangout leaving her child alone at home, and went home at midnight.

suddenly I felt someone stand beside me, I dunno since when he standing there.

"hey, are you alone?"

I nodded,

"can I know your name? my name is Teru, nice to meet you..."

for a few minutes I kept silent...

"hoshi.." I answered shortly...

"hmm, a good name..your name means star right? my name means light...nice to meet you hoshi..^^"

A smile grew on his lips, and I know he was hiding something painful, its just like me right?

I felt very happy actually, teru made my life feel different, more exiting maybe...

we started to play together, and slowly felt can't be apart from each other

one day I wnet to the school yard, teru promised me to play there, but he didn't came, the snow started to fall and I still waiting for him, thirty minutes passed, and the snow falled even worse, I decided to go home..

I caught a fever, I'm chilled lying on my bed. suddenly I hear a voice that I immediately recognized...

"hoshi.."

"teru....you were lie to me..."

"I'm sorry hoshi.."

we kept silent for a few minutes, then Teru continue his talk...

"I'm here to say goodbye..."

"how rude...you want to leave me??"

"Its hard to describe anyway, but I have to moved,,,"

"so, you move to another city?"

"uhm, yeah something like that I guess, sorry hoshi, I have to go now..."

teru left, after that day I never saw him anymore....

the school bell is ringing, we go home. slowly the snow falls, I'm walking home alone

"are you alone? may I accompany you"

"its alright, I'll walk by myself..."

and the one who I look is a junior high student, wearing the same uniform as me...

he is smiling, and its reminds me to a smile.

"ok, go on..."

he walk beside me, steps along the snowy path to my home..

"you know what? I was have a childhood friend, we always spent time together. I was thinking that we'll never be apart. but I was wrong, he leave me alone..."

"I was ten when I got an accident and unconscious, entered hospital and even had no friends...but It was strange, I was dreaming. one snowy day I was alone in an elementary school, looking a boy who not play with any friends, sitting on a bench. I came to him and asking his name, shortly we getting closer..Its bad when I moved to another hospital outside this country, I never dream about that boy anymore...even its just a dream, I really happy can spent so many fun moment with him...I woke up at the unknown place then, my family was really worried about me, they told me that I have been unconscious for 2 years...

I was left behind, took some courses I catch up some lesson at school..today, finally I can enter school like normal child, you know. I was shocked when I looked the boy that accompany me 2 years ago in my dream..."

"so you come back..."

we smile together...

"in a snowy day just like 2 years ago, and said 'are you alone..?'..."
~n0e~

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